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Three holes in a row
And I was sick enough to ignore the rhythm
Life is a blackhole in constant rotation
A collapsing conclusion of eruptions and infalls
Far from some imaginary velocity of escape
Counterclockwise we move and remove
And in the hour of zero point zero one
I scratch my eyeballs to make it all feel alright...
Just another thought. No one reads any ways...
...but if you happen to do, here are a few more you may like: [link]


+ Whatever happened to my favorite Literature / Poetry / Philosophical / Open gallery?! What the hell is wrong with dA?!

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:iconmahmoudyakut:
MahmoudYakut Jul 28, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
great job :)
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PSYXXARTS Jul 30, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thnx allot!
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:iconxerces:
Xerces May 13, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
Such an intense piece. Great job on the descriptions and imagery
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PSYXXARTS May 13, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you for the reading milady! I am glad you seem to have enjoyed it.
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:iconxerces:
Xerces May 16, 2010  Professional Artisan Crafter
:hug: welcome!
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IreneLangholm May 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I'm not sure I understand it, but it is well written and flows really good.
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PSYXXARTS May 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
mmmm... let me help you with that. Other than rage, it withholds sexual, physical and astronomical references. ;P
And hey! Thnx for reading!
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conzpiracy May 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Kool.

The prose is similar in tone to my alltime favourite poem 'Nemesis':

"I have seen the dark universe yawning
Where the black planets roll without aim,
Where they roll in their horror unheeded,
Without knowledge, or lustre, or name."

H.P. Lovecraft
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PSYXXARTS May 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Man was I just Compared to Lovecraft?! What an honor for him ;P:horns:
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conzpiracy May 4, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Im gonna tell him that ;p
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